THESIS STATEMENT and INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

WEDNESDAY, 16 DECEMBER 2013

ASSALAMUALAIKUM

BEL class again..hhihi...Today our class at a computer lab... Miss Zu will continue about her explaination  about writing  a thesis statement...After she finished hes lesson about writing a thesis statement,now she want us to learn how to do a introductory paragraph...hihi I still weak to writing an introductory paragraph..Usually I will taking more than 15 minutes  to writes a introductory paragraph during examination..It's too scary right??hmmm...I think writing an introductory paragraph is a quit difficult and I always writing a body paragraph first,and lastly I will do an introductory paragraph..hihi I don't know why...heheh But, in this evening,she said that we have to do a introductory paragraph first and we must know that we have some types of introductory styles called 'The Hook'..there are 8 types of 'The Hook'..LET SEE...

1. Definition
2. Contrast to the thesis statement
3. Facts and Statistics
4. Current events
5. Rhetorical question
6. Quotations
7. Personal examples
8. Funnel / Broad topic / General statement

Suddenly,Miss Zu came to Eika Ahamad and me and she asked us what will we  chooses to write an introductory paragraph...Then, after we discussed on what we will choose the best 8 of variety of 'The Hook', we are gonna write are statistics,and rhetorical questions.. We choose these because we were think this types is the easy one..Miss Zu was suggested to us to choose a personal examples because it can attracted more people  to reads our essay..Thank you Miss Zu..>_<  We will considerate about it.. When I think about it,personal example is the way to attract people to reads more about of our essay...
Ha!! what if I asked someone's experiences about making a deals or buying something using online shopping or by walking around from one shop to one shop are more better?? hmm What do you think?? Is that okay?? I hope that someone  will share your experience about whether shopping by online just needs a few click on your mouse or by traditional shopping is more better?? 

walking around to shopping mall

or maybe JUST
 one click on your mouse AND  you will get what you needs..

Think about it?? O.o don't forget to leave some comment to Eika Ahamad at http://eikahamad.blogspot.com/ or me..


WASSALAM...

LEARNT how to do a Thesis Statement..

TUESDAY, 15 DECEMBER 2013

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First time in our BEL class, we late come to our class today because before we attended to BEL class we have a QMT quiz and we have to finished it before we left to that class..We feel so worried that Miss Zu will angry to us because we came late to her class..After we explained that we are just having QMT quiz,she not angry to us..Alhamdulillah...Thanks,Ya Allah..

Ok,this Today miss zu want us to write thesis statement for outlining..But,before we write that thesis statement,we have to learn it first...Miss zu said that we have to know a few essay that usually come out during examination likes : 

1. Cause- Effect Essays .
2. Problem-Solution Essays.
3. Comparison-Contrats Essays .
4. Argumentative Essays.
5. Discussion Essays .

Miss Zu was explained to us on how to identified and write a thesis statement..We have to pay attention on what she said because we have to know how to write it and she also explained one by one based on the essay..Eika Ahamad and I were doing a compare and contrast essay..When Miss Zu explained about our types of essay we pay more attentions during the lecture to make sure that we do not make a mistake when we are doing a thesis statement..Miss Zu said that we have to know identified what types of essay and when we are writing a wrong essay ,we will get zero mark..Ohh,God..So scared...Hope that I not doing a mistake during examination that coming soon..For compare and contrast essay,these are 2 example that we can use..Let's check this out..huhu

EXAMPLE 1

 Introduction stating the thesis statement:

Public universities and private universities are different in term of the type of courses offered and the course fees charged but are similar in term of the nature of competitiveness.

Supporting point 1, with topic sentence:

Type of courses

Supporting point 2, with topic sentence:

Course fees

Supporting point 3, with topic sentence:

Nature of competitiveness

Conclusion summarising the main idea or restating the thesis statement:

In conclusion, it falls upon the student to compare the similarities and differences between public universitiy and a private universitiy before deciding which one to go.

EXAMPLE 2

Introduction stating the thesis statement:

When trying to decide where to dine, either at local restaurant or Western restaurant, patrons should consider several aspect that concern these dining places.Some of these aspect include the food selection, the service provided and the ambience of each restaurant.

Supporting point 1, with topic sentence:

Food selection

Supporting point 2, with topic sentence:

Service provided

Supporting point 3, with topic sentence:

Ambience of each restaurant

Conclusion summarising the main idea or restating the thesis statement:

Thus, in order to decide whether to dine at at a local restaurant or at a Western restaurant factors such as the food selection, the service provided and the ambience of the restaurant should be taken into consideration.

Lastly,hope that we can do the best.Miss Zu want us to write a thesis statement based on these 2 example and we are going to present next week on Tuesday. On Monday we don't have a class because Miss Zu are going to invigilate an examination for degree students.YESS..!!!hahaha We have many days to do a thesis statement.. . But, Miss Zu said, "more times means more pressure". I think what she just said are right because we have to do better and  hope that she is not rejecting our thesis statement..Aminn.. 

WASSALAM..

DEBATED..!! what should I do??

MONDAY, 14 JANUARY 2013

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Hye everyone..Today is our biggest day to us...This today I'm feel so exhausted and feel so sleepy  because yesterday I just came back from Felda Palong Timor at Segamat..I went at that place because my members and me are atttending a camp called OPKIM or "Program Khidmat Masyarakat"..If you want to know, I have a greatest and a  friendly villagers at there...I'm so happy because I get a friendly family and I'm very enjoyed for a last few days..huhu  Today, our classs at Dewan Seri Peria which is very nearest to my college at 2pm ..Today, I feel very uncomfortable and feel not interested to attended to a BEL class ..I feel very sleepy..Man! I have to force my self to attended to that class...

When miss zu entered to my class,we recite Surah  Al-Fatihah before she started her lesson..Today, Miss Zu want us to do a debated competition..Hah! Am I miss my hearing..??? I'm truly shocked because we are going to do a debated this today..What should i do?? I'm too afraid to speaks in public even in front of my classmate..I'm not very confidence to myself..But for Eika Ahamad,she really loves to speaks and when Miss Zu said this today we will have a debated competition,she really excited and laughing..Hah!! She really full of confidence but I'm difference..So sad.. =(

Then miss zu divided us into four groups..I'm in group 1 and my group members are Sarah, Bella, Ana, Izani, Faiz Adha, and Asyraf..Yuhuu..!!! I'm so happy because  I have a great teams..Then Miss Zu give us some topic to us..Our teams have to fight with group 2 and our topic is 'it is consider cheating when your partner (girlfriends/ boyfriends/ husbands/ wife ) was checking on other beautiful ( girls/ boys / men/ women) on poking , liking, and others.." We are given 20 minutes to find some main points and some informations about this topic...Luckily, Miss Zu give us permission to search some information by surfing to an internet..hihi When  our time were out, we started our debated competitions,  my group acts as a government sides and the another groups acts as opponent sides..For each group they present their capability and their best..I'm sorry guys, I can do my best when it is going to my turn..I truly nervous and too afraid at that time, it stuck my brain and I can't even thinking on what I'm should said..I'm so sorry..T_T  By the way, this is our points.. 

1. Can develop loving 
2. When the partner is busy on checking on facebook , the have pay less attention to his/her partner . 
3. Divorce - to the someone that have sensitive feeling it will make the couple / marriage go into divorce
4. Broken relationship
5. etc

This is our team acts as government sides..

this is another group that acts as opponent side

Thanks to all because they have present very well..Hehe After a 20 minutes we were debated,this is a time to group 3 and group 4 to debated...To me they get an easy question and their topic is '" is it true that men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work"..They work very hard to fight to other groups..Then when their time out, Miss Zu want all of us to decide who are the winner..Unlucky for the government sides, we not win..Buts it okay..This today gonna fun because we don't have any work to do..haha Oh! I forget to let you know that the best debaters are Rozita and Faiz Adha..Congrate..!!hihi

 I think that all for this today..I hope that  I can do my best for an another day..Amin...

WASSALAM

BLOG,BLOG!!!!

                                                       

WEDNESDAY, 9 JANUARY 2013…

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HEHE..blog!!BLOG..!!!

This is my lovely day..Nice to meets you again.. I  want to continued writing thiS blog.. Today our class at computer labs.. Don’t  forget that Miss Zu want to see our blog on this today...HOooo!!! I feel extremely nervous right now… What will happened to me .. I hope that she can give some positive comments or her views about my writing..haha today’s activity is Miss Zu want us to comment to the others blogs.. But, before that,she give us an hour to edits ,or adds something such as a pictures, some motivations quotes words and others to make sure that our blogs looks more gorgeous, attractive, and the most important is our blog must be have an amazing story and more cheerful.. While we edits our blog, Miss Zu go and check our blogs one by one.. When it comes to me, she want to see my views about our presentations topic.. She want me to puts more about recorded of our sources.. hehe

shocked right..!!

My friends and I were trying to do the best for their blog before a comment sessions..hehe After that Miss Zu shows to us some member’s blog..my members that Miss Zu opened the blog is Izat,Faiz Adha, and two others..Poor to Eika Ahamad,she cannot access the  internet.. So I decided that when I have finished editing, I want Eika to uses my computer to edits her blogs..hehe When the time is almost showed 5 pm, Miss Zu want all of us to started commenting others blogs..She doesn’t want to see us to editing more.. Then we started commenting each other..The first person that I comment is Izat’s  blog because Miss Zu want all of us to comment Izat’s blog..Miss Zu doesn’t  like the backgrounds and a font uses to his blogs..She want us to leave a few comment about that..hihi Izat, you are a funny person la..You always make laughing..hahaaha

 After that, I continue comments other friend’s post..WoOW..!!!when I look the other blogs, I’m very interested and feel a little bit jealous because, you want to know??WoOOOW…So beautiful, gorgeous, and very extremely creative with their backgrounds,their fonts and they putting some picture and so on to make their blogs more cheerful..hehe I really love to look their blogs and I want to make sure that I could have a beautiful,cheerful blogs.. haha OWhhHH…we have to ends this class because the times right now shows almost at 6 pm.. so for a next time I  will continue writes more post about BEL 311 class..Bye…

i want to do the best among the best..Yeaahh!!

<><><>Loves All Of YOU..<><><>

See You All Later…I really enjoyed to comment other members posts…

WASSALAM….^_^

FACTS AND OPINIONS..ANOTHER GAMES..??HMM I REALLY ENJOYED IT..hehe

TUESDAY, 8 DECEMBER 2013

 ...ASSALAMUALAIKUM...

YUHUU...I'm feeling greats this today, because  I have finished doing a blogs..haha if you want to know, I have finished doing 3 entries for one night and one more thing that I feel very lighter burdened in my heads..huhu Today our class started with recite du'a..I hope that this today,we will make some attractable,funny activities and so on..haha.After we recite some du'a  we proceeds our class..Miss Zu want to see our blog..First, she asked Faiz Adha to show it infront of our class..But, she cancelled it and she want Nadia Zamri  to open their blogs and showed it to us..hihi Miss Zu leave some comment to her blog....She  want Nadia to improved  their writing styles,she want her to rewrite more longer..Then she tell us that we can add some links about some facts,articles and meaning for some several words,she want us to be more creative on how to make sure our blog more cheerful,colourful and oh ya,she said that she want us to copy some motivations quotes,some picture and so on and paste it to on our blog..She want us to put many thing attractive items to share it to other members..She reminded us that by tomorrow evening she want look up our blogs one by one..Ohh,!! I'm feel nervous when she said that..Hopes that i can do it more better than before..Aminn..

remember  that..!!

Want to know what happened next after Miss Zu give us some commented about our writing levels and she want us to put some items to our blogs??haaa..Lets we proceed..hehee  Miss Zu tought us about Fact and Opinion..She asked to ous whether we remembered what is the meaning of Fact and Opinion...Unfortunately,we give the wrong answer..haha  Poor to Miss Zu..hihi Sorry Miss  Zu we cannot remembered it..Then she give us explanations about Fact and Opinion..Luckily, I get some time to copy what is the meaning about Fact and Opinion..Let's check this out...!!

First,is about Facts..Facts is a specific detail that can be proven as true based on objective evidence..For example is carrot contain high vitamin c that proven to help us in eyes problems.."

Meanwhiles for Opinion,opinion is about a feeling, judgement, belief or conclusionthat cannot be proven true by objective evidence..For example of  opinion "when we using Biore's cleanser it can help us to make our skin more smooths,not to oily and it will make our skin more healthy and cleans.."

Then Miss Zu shows to use about differences about Fact and Opinion..There are several differences that you must know about it..Let's read it together..^_^

FACTS	OPINIONS
Objective	Subjective
State reality	Interprets reality
Can verified	Cannot be verified
Presented with unbiased words	Presented with value words

After she explained some info about Fact and Opinion, she want us to playing a games..What? Games??? WOw!!  its quit interesting..hehe  For this activity we are divided into 6 groups that contain 4 until 5 peoples in one groups..I'm in a group 3 and my members is Athirah,Nabila,Bariah, and Salihin..hehe Then, after we are ready to play this games, she asked one of a member in each groups to come in front to choose some items that we have to introduced it as our product and we want to sales this product by using 5 sentences that we have to create it on our own words whether it is facts or opinions..My member ask me to go infront of our calss angd choose thats items..When I saw inside the box, I feel very  shocked because many items that i have too choose such as deodorant , compact powder,mini pocket of coffee,cleanser pore mask and others.. Ya Allah..!! To many stuff inside that box..I really confusing to choose one stuff..then, when Miss Zu asked u to choose faster,I grabed  a cleanser pore mask quickly because at the back we can get free information about that product..hehe She want us to do a sentences maximum words is 12 until 15 words for a sentences..She gave us a  few minutes to rewrite a sentences..After that, she asked us to present our product and from our sentences that we reads, the other group have to guess whether it is a facts or an opinions..hehe I love this activity because we can learnt on how to know a sentences whether it is a facts or an opinion.Thanks to Miss Zu..You are awesome person..huhu  without our concious, the watch shows 6 pm..Our classed  dismissed at 6 pm..Before we go to the night market, she reminds us about she want to saw our blog for tomorrow morning at computer labs..hehe  We will continue by tomorrow and i will tell you what happened on that day..See you next time...

WASSALAM...>_<

About our topics..Why we choose this topics?

MONDAY, 7 JANUARY 2013

ASSALAMUALAIKUM

Hye everyone..Today I'm going to share with you some interesting topics..My partner is Eika Ahamad and we have decided to do an compare and contrast essay..Our topics is about shopping.

BROAD TOPICS:

SHOPPING

NARROWED TOPICS:

ONLINE SHOPPING VERSUS

TRADITIONAL SHOPPING

FOCUS TOPICS:

THE COMPARE AND CONTRAST ELEMENTS BETWEEN ONLINE AND TRADITIONAL SHOPPING AMONG MALAYSIAN BUYERS..

I guess that there are some people wondered why we  are choosing this topics..Lets me explained it to you guys why we choose this topics..first reason why i choose this topics is because I feel attracted with this topics because I like to see an items that sold in internet and I really want to try bought some items or goods by using online shopping..hehe Nowadays shopping through the internet seem  very  popular among the buyers in Malaysia because they don't have many times to shopping at retailer shops or shopping mall because they ..If you have heards about Zalora.com, e-bay and mudah.com,this is one of the famous website thats being hotly debated in this today... In my views , it is a lot of  many sources that we can choose..One more thing, there are many different between online shopping and traditional shopping that we get it from various sources such asin internet,newspaper,magazines and a journal... It will make us more easier to elaborate our topics..That's why we are choosing this topics because we want to compare and contrast these topics. 

So, we want to figure out between online shopping and traditional shopping which one is the best deal among the buyer.

We have found a lot of information from internet, newspaper, magazines and journal. Below is the one of example for our records of sources...

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Newspaper (The News York Times)
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Luring online shopper online
AUTHORS	Stephanie Clifford
PUBLISHER	The News York Times
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2012
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS(ONLINE SOURCES)	http://www.nytimes.com
DATE OF RETRIEVAL(ONLINE SOURCES)	19/12/2012
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	3 Pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Articles
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Traditional vs Online shopping
AUTHORS	Amy Nutt
PUBLISHER	Ezinearticles
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2007
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS(ONLINE SOURCES)	http://ezinearticles.com
DATE OF RETRIEVAL(ONLINE SOURCES)	31 /12/2012
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	4 Pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Internet
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Online Retailing versus Traditional Stores in the Purchasing Decision Making Process
AUTHORS	Barbara Gligorijevic
PUBLISHER	Queensland University of Technology
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2011
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS(ONLINE SOURCES)	Barbara.gligorijevic@qut.edu.au
DATE OF RETRIEVAL(ONLINE SOURCES)	5/1/13
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	8 pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Magazines (ThePen)
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Online Shopping
AUTHORS	ThePen
PUBLISHER	ThePen
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2012
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS(ONLINE SOURCES)	http://seekyt.com
DATE OF RETRIEVAL(ONLINE SOURCES)	20/12/12
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	1 Pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Journal
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Cross-cultural differences in perceived risk of online shopping
AUTHORS	Hanjun Ko, Jaemin Jung, Joo Young Kim, & Sung Wook Shim
PUBLISHER	American Academy of Advertising
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2010
ISBN/ ISSN	1525-2019
WEBSITE ADDRESS(ONLINE SOURCES)	Jiad.org.com
DATE OF RETRIEVAL(ONLINE SOURCES)	5/1/2013
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	Vol 4, No 2, 8 pages

Alhamdulillah,we are done doing our recorded topics.., Right now, we are going to preparing our outline.you all have to wait for its okay..huhu   I want you all leave some comment about our topics..hehe 

WASSALAM..