Miss Zu want to check our introductory paraghraph

WEDNESDAY, 30 JANUARY 2013

ASSALAMUALAIKUM

Today we will continue with the next two groups that are not present it yet, groups Rozita and Asnawi..The first presenter are Asnawi and his partner Acap..What will going to be happen to that guys?hmm.. Miss Zu really mad to them because their thesis statement were wrong..And in addition,she really angry to us because when she asked us what the other words that can be replace from their thesis statement,we are not answered it..My brain totally blank..She really want us to help to find some correct words and not just depending to her to find a suitable words..I truly don't know what words can be replace with that words...She really disappointed to us and finally she correct that words and structure sentences...

The next partner is Ita and Nabila..They have the same case with Asnawi and Acap..But,Miss Zu not really angry for this time..Maybe she just tired...Then,after She approved their thesis statement,we proceed with our introductory paragraph..She want to see and checked one by one of our introductory paragraph.She always make me nervous la..haha I feel that our introductory paragraph is to simple and we just use one type of hook..hmm..So, before she came to us,we should make some adjustments and some new hook to our introductory paragraph..Eika and I make a new introduction with 2 hook which are statistic and rhetorical question..We really hope that she will give us some positive comment to our introductory paragraph..Before she come to us,we asked help from Faiz Adha to checked our introductory paragraph..We choose him because he is good in grammar..When he said there is okay, we feel glad..huhu 

She want us to be independent and do the outlining without her help..She want us to learnt it..She just want to guide us not to correcting every words and sentences..She also give us some example on how to do it..Our class is dismissed at 6pm..
We want to do the best..!!!Yeahh!!

WASSALAM