Saturday 19 January 2013

LEARNT how to do a Thesis Statement..

TUESDAY, 15 DECEMBER 2013


<><><>ASSALAMUALAIKUM<><><>


First time in our BEL class, we late come to our class today because before we attended to BEL class we have a QMT quiz and we have to finished it before we left to that class..We feel so worried that Miss Zu will angry to us because we came late to her class..After we explained that we are just having QMT quiz,she not angry to us..Alhamdulillah...Thanks,Ya Allah..

Ok,this Today miss zu want us to write thesis statement for outlining..But,before we write that thesis statement,we have to learn it first...Miss zu said that we have to know a few essay that usually come out during examination likes : 


  1. Cause- Effect Essays .
  2. Problem-Solution Essays.
  3. Comparison-Contrats Essays .
  4. Argumentative Essays.
  5. Discussion Essays .
Miss Zu was explained to us on how to identified and write a thesis statement..We have to pay attention on what she said because we have to know how to write it and she also explained one by one based on the essay..Eika Ahamad and I were doing a compare and contrast essay..When Miss Zu explained about our types of essay we pay more attentions during the lecture to make sure that we do not make a mistake when we are doing a thesis statement..Miss Zu said that we have to know identified what types of essay and when we are writing a wrong essay ,we will get zero mark..Ohh,God..So scared...Hope that I not doing a mistake during examination that coming soon..For compare and contrast essay,these are 2 example that we can use..Let's check this out..huhu



EXAMPLE 1

 Introduction stating the thesis statement:
Public universities and private universities are different in term of the type of courses offered and the course fees charged but are similar in term of the nature of competitiveness.

Supporting point 1, with topic sentence:
Type of courses

Supporting point 2, with topic sentence:
Course fees

Supporting point 3, with topic sentence:
Nature of competitiveness

Conclusion summarising the main idea or restating the thesis statement:
In conclusion, it falls upon the student to compare the similarities and differences between public universitiy and a private universitiy before deciding which one to go.

EXAMPLE 2

Introduction stating the thesis statement:
When trying to decide where to dine, either at local restaurant or Western restaurant, patrons should consider several aspect that concern these dining places.Some of these aspect include the food selection, the service provided and the ambience of each restaurant.

Supporting point 1, with topic sentence:
Food selection

Supporting point 2, with topic sentence:
Service provided

Supporting point 3, with topic sentence:
Ambience of each restaurant

Conclusion summarising the main idea or restating the thesis statement:
Thus, in order to decide whether to dine at at a local restaurant or at a Western restaurant factors such as the food selection, the service provided and the ambience of the restaurant should be taken into consideration.


Lastly,hope that we can do the best.Miss Zu want us to write a thesis statement based on these 2 example and we are going to present next week on Tuesday. On Monday we don't have a class because Miss Zu are going to invigilate an examination for degree students.YESS..!!!hahaha We have many days to do a thesis statement.. . But, Miss Zu said, "more times means more pressure". I think what she just said are right because we have to do better and  hope that she is not rejecting our thesis statement..Aminn.. 



WASSALAM..





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