THESIS STATEMENT and INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH

WEDNESDAY, 16 DECEMBER 2013

ASSALAMUALAIKUM

BEL class again..hhihi...Today our class at a computer lab... Miss Zu will continue about her explaination  about writing  a thesis statement...After she finished hes lesson about writing a thesis statement,now she want us to learn how to do a introductory paragraph...hihi I still weak to writing an introductory paragraph..Usually I will taking more than 15 minutes  to writes a introductory paragraph during examination..It's too scary right??hmmm...I think writing an introductory paragraph is a quit difficult and I always writing a body paragraph first,and lastly I will do an introductory paragraph..hihi I don't know why...heheh But, in this evening,she said that we have to do a introductory paragraph first and we must know that we have some types of introductory styles called 'The Hook'..there are 8 types of 'The Hook'..LET SEE...

1. Definition
2. Contrast to the thesis statement
3. Facts and Statistics
4. Current events
5. Rhetorical question
6. Quotations
7. Personal examples
8. Funnel / Broad topic / General statement

Suddenly,Miss Zu came to Eika Ahamad and me and she asked us what will we  chooses to write an introductory paragraph...Then, after we discussed on what we will choose the best 8 of variety of 'The Hook', we are gonna write are statistics,and rhetorical questions.. We choose these because we were think this types is the easy one..Miss Zu was suggested to us to choose a personal examples because it can attracted more people  to reads our essay..Thank you Miss Zu..>_<  We will considerate about it.. When I think about it,personal example is the way to attract people to reads more about of our essay...
Ha!! what if I asked someone's experiences about making a deals or buying something using online shopping or by walking around from one shop to one shop are more better?? hmm What do you think?? Is that okay?? I hope that someone  will share your experience about whether shopping by online just needs a few click on your mouse or by traditional shopping is more better?? 

walking around to shopping mall

or maybe JUST
 one click on your mouse AND  you will get what you needs..

Think about it?? O.o don't forget to leave some comment to Eika Ahamad at http://eikahamad.blogspot.com/ or me..


WASSALAM...